Okay, this was a pretty eye catching picture for me. I've never seen a picture like this where a dog (?) and a piece of toast fit together like this certain picture. However, I can't really tell if he's grabbing the piece of toast or throwing it, maybe some motion lines will help? The blur effect is sort of on beginner side here, maybe try to make it a bit funnel shaped like the piece of toast is slicing through the air at great speed. I don't have that many problems wit the body, except maybe the arm is too short and his other arm seem to not be there. Shading for silly and dramatic effect is also recommended But over all, I think this is a pretty creative and unique picture! Keep on improving! (Also, sorry if I messed up on English, it's not my first language. )
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